Saturday, August 15, 2015

The Earth

(poem by Minnal)


The Sun is very big
but the Earth is very small
The Earth is very big
but I am very small
I am very big
but the ants are very small
The ants are very big
but the germs are very small

I… love the
nature of the world
So peaceful
and nice
and very kind.

I… love the
earth so much
seeing the flowers bloom(2)

Hearing the trees
swaying all the way,
the buzzing bees
buzzing in my way,
singing and dancing
near the hay,
I see a dancing
Peacock in my way.

Oh… what a very nice day!
I couldn’t imagine
a day like this!
Looking at the clouds
moving in the sky,
I think
I will have a try! (2)




10 comments:

  1. Super Minnal. Enjoyed reading your poem.. Keep writing

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  2. Super Minnal. Enjoyed reading your poem.. Keep writing

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  3. Good ones, though at high level her words looks like a child's view, it has deep positive thoughts. Way to go Minnal, impressive.

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  4. Guru Samy: Minnal super. Why don't you write tamil poem also?

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  5. Deepa Tarak: Wow. Fact that she is writing poetry at such a young age is awesome. Will surely read it and pass detailed comments

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  6. Ajita Dwivedi: Brilliant... Well done meenal.. Talked about all living things in such a beautiful way

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  7. Viji Balaji: Nice poem and appreciate ur thoughts Minnal, good job!!

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  8. Kalyani Govindaraju: Lovely writing and brilliant thinking made me feel so close to nature. Good Job Minnal keep writing!!!! XOxo

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  9. Sharanya VimalKumar: Supper kutti

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