Oh! look
there!
There is a
seed!
Let’s take
care of it
and give it
what it needs
After some
days,
I saw a
sprout
With the
joy I had,
You could
hear me shout!
After some
more days
I see more
leaves!
And all
this happened
Because I gave
it it’s need!
-Minnal Senthil
30 Nov 2016
Beautiful minnal, avyan
ReplyDeletePurvi Shah: Beautiful Minnal...so simply yet beautifully worded....keep up the great writing
ReplyDeleteSriVani: Very nice👏👏👏👏excellent... Good minnal keep it up dear
ReplyDeleteVisa Senthil: Thank you Purvi. Minnal's word about the poem...."everything should get it's needs to grow"....i am not sure whether she realised what she was talking about, but i saw a very deep meaning in it
ReplyDeletePurvi Shah: Beautiful mind...:-)
ReplyDeleteKumari Nambi: Minnal 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
ReplyDelete[9:26 PM, 11/30/2016] Monika Prachi Mother: Beautiful Poem
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[9:27 PM, 11/30/2016] Monika Prachi Mother: Stories , poems
Amazing Minnal
Sarulatha: True...😀 minnal always super .. love her poems..
ReplyDeleteSelvam Mathi: Minnal.very nice
ReplyDeleteSaradha: 👏🏻👏🏻
ReplyDeleteIt's a joy to read Minnal's stories/poems...blessings to her����
ReplyDeleteMathi Azhagan: ஒருமுறைக்கு இருமுறை யோசித்தால்
ReplyDeleteஒரு விதைக்குள் இவ்வளவு விஷயமா?
மின்னலாய் புரிய வைத்த மின்னலே - வாழ்க
Good one !!
ReplyDeleteEzhil Ashok: From all her poems I can see Minnal as a kindhearted and Ecofriendly Girl😍....Expecting more:-)
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