Wednesday, January 31, 2018

Bloody Red Lunar Eclipse

7:20 I am seeing the Lunar Eclipse

I am seeing the eclipse
It is very beautiful
The red colour
Looks so wonderful!

One side is red,
Black is the other
In the middle
It’s the blend of colours

Now it is red
But normally white
Now it is dim
But normally bright

It is very dim
Because of pollution!
Not making any pollution,
Is the only solution!

The Moon is awesome
The Moon is pretty
The Moon is spectacular
And Red very very!

7:45   The lunar eclipse after 25 minutes

The Moon was red
Now one corner is white
Before, the whole was dim
Now, one corner is bright

The eclipse is going
And the white is coming
It still looks beautiful
And like a pretty ring

Oh! Look at the Moon
The white has increased
And the pretty red part
Has certainly decreased

Oh! When will I
Probably see
The next lunar eclipse
Next month maybe!

8:02 The eclipse is going away

Now the moon
Is almost half white
The poor red part
Is not at all Bright

The moon is still amazing
But the red part
Is almost black and
can be good to draw in art

Just One hour ago
To the eclipse, I said hi
But now it’s going away
I will have to say, Bye!

8:24 The red portion is gone!

The Moon’s white portion
Has come out of the Eclipse
The Moon will be white
Completely now soon!

The pretty lunar eclipse
Is going to end
I hope I have become
The eclipse’s close friend

The awesome lunar eclipse
Is now almost done
When the eclipse was going on
I hope you had fun

8:40 The eclipse is gone

Now the wonderful moon
Has turned completely white
And is now very
Pretty and bright!

The eclipse is gone
Our moon is now a full moon
I felt the eclipse
Went away so soon

The lunar eclipse was stupendous
And is now done
The eclipse was spectacular
I hope you had fun!

Minnal Senthil
31-01-2018



15 comments:

  1. Sujatha Ashok: This is really quite something. Beautifully expressed. I hope to be reading a lot more of her writing.

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  2. Sarada Mku Mca: Wow...super .... 👏🏼👏🏼

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  3. Bharathi: Ware wah fantastic narration 👌

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  4. Shyamala: Excellent poem, Visa. I loved her word choice and style. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

    Give my love to Minnal.

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  5. Viji Balaji: 👍🏻👏🏼👏🏼

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  6. S R Ramakrishnan: 👍👍👍👌👌👌

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  7. Lakshmi: Awesome 👏👏👏👌👌

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  8. Minnal too good. Excellent that you love nature's magic and are so good at expressing your appreciation. Keep writing always

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  9. Nice poem Minnal! I could picture the moon as it changed shades.

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  10. Kanchana Vetrivel: Oru minnal sudaraga men melum walara walthugal

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  11. Uma Ram Swaminathan: Awesome!!

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  12. Jessy Mathew 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👌🏼

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  13. Priya Bhaskaran: Really superb, keep going....

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